Thursday 10 March 2011

dissolved

let me hold your tiredness
and those troubling thoughts
you have, will disappear.
I will dissolve all those in a chemical
of my own making,
the scent of which will engulf us.
I will add our combined forces
so that no negative thing pitches out

"I will attune it all to flow smoothly between us" 

42 comments:

  1. sounds like a perfect chemistry to me

    :)

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  2. I gave a standing ovation to this..Gautami..the words..'combined forces' make it all so easy..

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  3. smiles. nice bit of chemistry you got going in your 55...

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  4. Gautami...
    Very sensual today.
    Someone would be very lucky to be loved by you.
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  5. I'm thinking of a good back rub followed by a glass of Malbec. Smiles.

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  6. What a lovely 55! I like the tone and the cadence. And the sensuality of it is great. Really fine writing!

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  7. perfect chemistry :)
    and sensual too

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  8. Anything that can dissolve problems has got to be good chemistry!

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  9. Your writings have taken on a nice, sultry quality lately, Gautami. I'm sure there's a reason and I'm sure it's good. :)

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  10. I like this chemistry......Smooth and soothing

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  11. cool chemical reactions, if not, that's physical reaction..
    thanks for the inspirations.
    love your 55.

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  12. Oh, this is so relaxing, Gautami.

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  13. Actually, it sounds like a lot of work to me. But the kind with nice pay offs.

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  14. Very tempting... beautiful!

    ~laurie

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  15. Ohhh... this is wonderful, sensual, inviting, promising.

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  16. Gautami, a lovely sensual piece.
    It is all about chemistry.

    Pamela

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  17. Beautiful! Now that's a chemistry that would be life-altering!

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  18. Ooooo, very nice! I do believe we make new chemicals according to the different friend and lover matches we make.

    And, a bit unrelated, I shall make YOUR very own special sidebar button next, and post it on my site! Look for it in the next 1 to 36 hours! whooohoo.

    xoxo

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  19. Romantic science - that's a new one, and so delightful

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  20. Sensual and endearing. This is beautiful! I'm still letting the words and the visuals swim in my mind while I imagine the speaker and her audience.

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  21. Gautami, although I like your title, I think you might want to call this one The Chemistry of Sensuality. It is smooth and so visual somehow. Great writing,

    Elizabeth

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  22. When the desire to heal meets chemical . . this is one terrific scientific remedy. Lovely.

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  23. Love that science has measured the differences in chemistry that occur within us when we meet with ones we love...great poem!

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  24. They say that love is chemistry. This sounds too good for simple science though.

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  25. Dissolution becomes a lovely thing. Nice.

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  26. When Chem mixes in with physics and bio, the magic is beyond historic!

    Nice flow to this one, Gautami..

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  27. The chemistry of our love for each other. Ahhhh.....

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  28. ah how luck to have someone like that in our lives :) :)

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  29. When the chemistry becomes unstable, is that a bad thing or a good thing?

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  30. What a challenge.


    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  31. wow the waters are calm...

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  32. That is a beautiful promise of love.

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  33. Gautami, not just maths, you are master of chemistry as well! Like the way it is put.

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  34. lovely to be able to attune like this.

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  35. Lovely, lovely, lovely!! if that's not poetry in words, then I don't know what is.

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  36. You offer much in your gentle way. I enjoy the scent of your pen's scratches

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