I like this very much. Nice 160. :-)
hmm...plunge myselfinto your luminous soul...sounds good..nice 160!
woohoo...that sounds like fun....smiles. nice 160.my 160
HA! Very good! I hope it was so worth it.
This is good. I like it a lot.
You reminded me of a nice conversation between two friends in one of Rand's books 'We the Living'...I liked your 160... merging with the soul..ultimate of existence perhaps..
All or nothing love? That might actually be the best.
That sounds like a joyful plunge. Great 160. Thanks for playing.
Wow. Intense, and shuddering.Su-sieee! MacThis and That. Here and There. Now, Sometimes Then.
wonderful! plunge myself into your luminous soul ... wonderful embrace of totality!
I do insist.
mmm loving this! all or nothing. xo
So wonderful and passionate!
Love the use of 'plunge' and 'luminous' - lovely image
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Gautami,Visiting after a long gap as my home PC was not working. Read all current and some old poems. A Gift For You shows the anger so well. Dad, Father, Farther shows deep love between father and daughter. Eternal Enemies, very sound and much needed advice. Within Pages shows deep feelings and so does Totality.Take carePS : Looking for your visit. You can navigate by clicking on my name here.
All or nothing, eh? Nice One Shot, Gautami!
a good way to be Gautami. they asked for it.
Love and sex - all or nothing at all. I really think all women feel that way, but some sell themselves out. Your poem captures the true emotion. Thanks, Gay @beachanny
What a perfect free verse... I liked it so much... Plunge... ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/
very clear. And well put. Excellent One Shot 160!
a great share..i love the 160's just havent had time of late to take part.. thanks for sharing wiht one shot
I only believe in totality... Great one shot. Love and Light, Sender
It's either beautiful or stalkerish (yes, that's a compliment - it variable mood(s), depending on the reader). Given the tone of your site, I'll vote for the beautiful.