I can feel the thirst.
My brain is tingling, too!
My tongue tingled when I read this out loud...good one!
Fantastic flow and so sweet lol you have a way with words ;)
Tantalised and traumatised - even our taste buds live dramatic lives.
I like how you changed the repetitions to keep it fresh!
walking through the forestrainMY FEET ARE WETthroughthe forest rainwalkingThe T's ToTaly Tangled.Interesting! _m
I like the tantalising tingles - it's so vivid, it sparkles.
The 'T's make this work so well!
i like this :)tingles when seduced. tingles when traumatized.
satisfied thirsts. loved the t sounds
terribly teffic tongue twisting tone!
Tingling tongue twister! Love it Gautami!Third attempt at posting....
making my rounds late on the train... still haven't tried the naisaiKu. sounds like fun.tingling in vancouver...
I love tongue twisters-- this one is special for its effect on the tongue even by reading it silently! Very, very clever, as your poems always are--love this one.