I'd say 'delicious', but Sage beat me to it.
line 3 says it all....
Certainly a good one, Gautami.
It's good to get lost in such moments - but old reality has a habit of eventually saying enough :-)
Very sensual! These few words paint quite the rich image!
I love the image...well done.
Well paced lace!
i'm sorry but imma use the word again: 'delicious!'
I'll say 'luscious'. :~)
I love the sound of "fingers nipping"(and if you say it fast it sound like "finger snipping"!)
Hey, Nice One!!You write real well ... Hope to see you tomorrow at Tell a Tale, as it launches...Be the first one to post your entry and accumulate higher points!
Wow that was some write...sensuous!
I like how you created a nice moment with so few words.
I really liked this one a lot.
Hello Gautami.Lovely poem.To me, this conjures a Victorian ether party, before and after the bottle is opened. Or a coming out debutante's ball.Great work, Gautami.Tschuess,Chris
hey Good play with words!!
Very nice Tami but then you are a true poet. Lovely.love,Melanie-bd
Ah!, How romantic..really mushy and refreshing..Loved this!
Hi Gautami, Here I am, sorry I've been away, I could see your blog but my keyboard was swimming in coffee and would'nt let me post anything...That Moment seems like a nice place to be Lost in!!