I tried a senryu after very long. Hope it works!
ideal resolvesvery impressive showbitter to swallow
a bitter pill to swallow indeed. good lines these. :)
i like this form alot. :)
Very nice, enjoyed the subtlety the form demands - I sure think you nailed it!
I think you were very successful in the senryu. It is a new look at an old phase.
I agree with all your previous visitors. Very well done and oh so real. Thanks.
Just a reminder that your OSI prompt, spectacles, is up next week. Please let me know if this works for you!
No matter how hard I try, I have great difficulty writing these forms. In this I'm afraid I lack the resolve.
This type is new to me and it is beautiful!
Hey Gautami, I like it! That's why I don't do New Years' Resolutions. I like sugar pills...
Yes, ideals often look great on paper, and turn into nightmares when implemented-this was the twentieth century.Thank you for sharing this.
New Year's DayI can't break the habitof resolution
Oh, it works!! Very well...
Very nice!Being a list maker, I have much experience with resolve. It is not always bitter.
Oh, i know this one! Very nice.
Senryu, a new learning for me; from a human viewpoint rather than nature. There are many bitter pills hidden from view. Lovely.
Great pen, straight on! Thank you!
I'm not sure how it works technically, but it jumped right out at me. Excellent!!
..a very apt comment on human nature..many thanks..
love the comments..i agree w/all of them!!
Sharp, pointed poetry! Very good!
yes. I'd say it works!thanks so much!