Sunday, 24 December 2006

Uprising

This post has nothing to do with christmas. My poetic urge took over and here I am posting another one...still raw and out of the mill!
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Uprising

fire oddly restrained;
lost in the fumes,
inside surefire stockade-

releasing the shaft,
consenting it to breathe
disregarding its rage.

soaring above blistered
remnants which storms up
unfettered and uninhibited
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6 comments:

  1. Wonderful word pictures. May Christmas' brightest star shine upon you. Blessings, Don

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  2. Thanks don. I wish the same for you.

    Kai...for you too.

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  3. Powerful images gt! We seem to share some impassioned elements.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, sweet lady!

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  4. Very intense. It felt like holding my breath (while the fire does the breathing).

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