Sunday, 20 November 2011

oblivion



drowned in spark,
oblivious of silence;
trapped in smolder
of mindless fire
sky rains diamonds

which fleetingly show their face
and fly away to another planet
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33 comments:

  1. Brian Miller20 November 2011 at 10:36

    magical mystical write...all surround a moment of beautiful love...

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  2. Monkey Man20 November 2011 at 10:46

    Passion and fire behind this 160. Thanks for playing.

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  3. Martin20 November 2011 at 11:24

    I like the idea of this couple being "...drowned in spark..."

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  4. Morning20 November 2011 at 11:50

    sweet.

    Happy Sunday.

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  5. Morning20 November 2011 at 11:50

    sweet.

    Happy Sunday.

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  6. Maureen20 November 2011 at 14:13

    "drowned", "oblivious", "trapped". . . then that opening out to "fly away to another planet": effects of being lost to love. Nice tie-in of "spark" with "diamonds".

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  7. JJ Roa Rodriguez20 November 2011 at 15:31

    magical indeed! love it!

    JJRod'z

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  8. Tess Kincaid20 November 2011 at 15:37

    I love "trapped in smolder"...

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  9. brenda w20 November 2011 at 16:47

    This is fabulous. I love the picture, and the movie where it originated. Great work here.

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  10. C Hummel Kornell a/k/a C Hummel Wilson20 November 2011 at 19:31

    Ah, love, beautiful.

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  11. Adura Ojo21 November 2011 at 04:58

    Yes, the universse has it! Nicely penned.

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  12. Bone21 November 2011 at 05:32

    Love "sky rains diamonds."

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  13. izzy21 November 2011 at 05:46

    super! near and far- for sure- inner and outer space simultaneously!thanks.

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  14. JANU21 November 2011 at 08:43

    the sparks fly...lovely

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  15. flaubert21 November 2011 at 09:43

    Passionate piece, Gautami.

    Pamela

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  16. Magical Mystical Teacher21 November 2011 at 11:25

    My, this is a compact piece!

    13 Wordle Haiku

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  17. Sue21 November 2011 at 12:30

    Nice. I'm feeling some sparks myself!

    =)

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  18. zenmirror21 November 2011 at 12:48

    you really capture the obsession that is love and lust

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  19. Carrie Burtt21 November 2011 at 12:55

    "sky rains diamonds"...this is beautiful Gautami!!

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  20. Cad21 November 2011 at 13:37

    That's some spark...

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  21. barbara21 November 2011 at 15:15

    Neat pairing of the two prompts. You really give the best to both of them. "Trapped in smolder" is my favorite

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  22. Victoria21 November 2011 at 17:43

    Stunning image in this, Gautami!

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  23. Tumblewords:21 November 2011 at 19:53

    Drowned in spark - an emotive piece!

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  24. Kay22 November 2011 at 02:18

    Delightful use of words to create the scene of passion. Love it!

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  25. Lyn22 November 2011 at 08:21

    A moment of perfect love..raining diamonds..such passion!!

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  26. Marianne22 November 2011 at 09:53

    I love this! "Trapped in smolder
    of mindless fire" is an awesome line!

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  27. Daydreamertoo22 November 2011 at 09:58

    Might be nice to fly away to another planet. Goodness knows we're making enough mess of this one.
    Lovely prose and great use of the prompt words :)

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  28. keiths ramblings22 November 2011 at 16:05

    What a passionate piece! Couldn't be more different from mine!

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  29. Olive Tree23 November 2011 at 03:25

    awesome, what a fantastic way of using the words, gautami. mine is nothing compared to this. i couldn't even include all of them. thank you for visiting mine and leaving me a wonderful comment.

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  30. Mike Patrick23 November 2011 at 08:21

    Love’s oblivion: found in ecstasy—lost in tragedy. Such fragile steel from emotions wrought.

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  31. Cheryl23 November 2011 at 10:36

    I love your poem. It's sparkly and diamond encrusted.

    http://mysticmissive.blogspot.com

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  32. Leonora Sophie25 November 2011 at 05:02

    ooooooh! i like it!!!!

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  33. zongrik26 November 2011 at 16:06

    very passionate

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