Monday, 21 November 2011

moon sways

the moon sings to the stars
it is sight to behold
the stars swaying to melody
celestial dance of eternal love
soaks into my pores
moon is all alone
yet never lonely
spiritual love of the sun
gives it a glow, a light
which does not belong to it
yet sun is seeking the moon
giving its own light
they get across to each other
through the darkness
dispelling it for us
the day in the month sun sulks
the moon hides
yet the stars dance in the euphoria

"my vote goes for you
who looks at the moon and thinks of me.
hopefully"
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19 comments:

  1. :-Dee21 November 2011 at 09:45

    The first four lines were magical and spell binding!! Lovely poetry...

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  2. Sherry Blue Sky21 November 2011 at 10:11

    Beautiful....and "the stars dance in euphoria." I especially love the last three lines, in italics.

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  3. Heaven21 November 2011 at 16:27

    a night dance..lovely to see and behold ~

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  4. The Write Girl21 November 2011 at 18:08

    This is such a beautiful poem. The sun and moon are paired together so beautifully.

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  5. Mama Zen21 November 2011 at 19:06

    Lovely!

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  6. oldegg21 November 2011 at 22:20

    I love the nights when the moon sulks and all those other stars peep out and say hello. A beautiful piece of writing.

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  7. zongrik21 November 2011 at 22:47

    the moon is just a big tease

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  8. Ramesh Sood22 November 2011 at 06:47

    I am always keen on Moon and Strars and Sun.. wow!! Well sid Gautami... our votes too have purposes...

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  9. keith hillman22 November 2011 at 11:13

    Delightful! The first four lines could stand alone as a lovely piece of their own.

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  10. Daydreamertoo22 November 2011 at 14:18

    I'm with some of the others, the last three lines can stand alone.
    Beautiful.

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  11. Brian Miller23 November 2011 at 04:05

    nice...an excellent close...endearing and warm....

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  12. Bone23 November 2011 at 04:49

    Filled with beauty. I loved the very last lines, too.

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  13. Shashi23 November 2011 at 06:12

    this is lovely... I enjoyed the cosmic creation.. thanks for sharing..

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-sighs.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  14. Caty23 November 2011 at 17:58

    such a beautiful cosmic romance you've written...I so love the moon, as does the sun which shines on it at night :)

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  15. California Ink in Motion25 November 2011 at 08:33

    Beautiful poem. I am a fan of the moon and stars. Thank you for your visit and pointing the way to this beautiful crafting of words.

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  16. Susie Clevenger25 November 2011 at 22:34

    I have such love for the moon. It inspires many of my writings..the moon sings to the stars...beautiful!

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  17. Berowne26 November 2011 at 11:07

    A VERY good piece of writing -- thanks.

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  18. Laura Maria27 November 2011 at 07:47

    Lovely through and through starting with the title. Thanks for sharing!

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  19. Morning27 November 2011 at 10:24

    cool imagery.

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