Sunday, 28 March 2010

transient

it is two o'clock-
time when someone else’s love
becomes transiently yours
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17 comments:

  1. Erin @ Together for Good28 March 2010 at 10:43

    Stopping by from Carry On Tuesday-- I love this. I am a sucker for a good haiku. :) I want to know the story here.

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  2. Janet28 March 2010 at 10:52

    Nice one! I like the links:-)

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  3. Stan Ski29 March 2010 at 02:32

    Not tonight - I'll be watching the football match (6 hours time difference)... Come on City...!

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  4. Lorraine29 March 2010 at 02:59

    I can only think soap operas...;)

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  5. iamyuva29 March 2010 at 04:47

    and it was 2'o clock when I lost 1hr to the summer timezone..

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  6. Andy Sewina29 March 2010 at 07:55

    Hi Gautami,
    I planned to meet you in my dreams
    You dreamed you'd meet me too
    No accident of fate or chance
    We planned our dreams
    We chose romance
    Every night at two...

    <3 perhaps?

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  7. Julia Smith29 March 2010 at 08:19

    Is it because you can hear them from the next room?

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  8. sage29 March 2010 at 09:32

    What's special about 2 o'clock? AM or PM? nice haiku

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  9. Short Poems29 March 2010 at 10:25

    Nice one :)

    Marinela

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  10. sg beatty29 March 2010 at 14:04

    old Grizz is in awe...so much said,,so few words...nice post

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  11. RBroeker29 March 2010 at 18:28

    To me it is the term of "someone else's love". This put's the lyrical I into the role of a love-eater. Tough haiku.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  12. mia29 March 2010 at 20:16

    seductively mysterious.

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  13. Melissa29 March 2010 at 20:26

    specifically unspecific, leaving you wondering, and everyone else *smiling*

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  14. illyriataylor31 March 2010 at 09:30

    oh yes, 2a knows all of our secrets! Well done

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  15. rdl31 March 2010 at 18:17

    Very nice!

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  16. one more believer1 April 2010 at 13:34

    oh man my mind wonders.... possibly a cup of soothing peppermint tea....

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  17. Carry On Tuesday3 April 2010 at 18:17

    Hi - Carry On Tuesday has a new address. Hope to see you there. Keith

    http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/

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