Wednesday, 14 October 2009

exulting mixture













irresistible progeny of internet
uses exulting language
vowelized words croak
capricious, insolent, vehement
do these work together?
cosmoranic rebrobates
sounds good to me
I let the investment lie low
words need to cool down before
exploded chelations hit me hard
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23 comments:

  1. anthonynorth15 October 2009 at 02:58

    A great use of the words.

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  2. Irene15 October 2009 at 03:15

    Inventive use of spam.

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  3. Lorraine15 October 2009 at 04:08

    Oh yeah love the cosmoranic rebrobates lol great great expression

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  4. Linda15 October 2009 at 05:48

    Compacted, concise and creative. The mixture works
    Gautami. Thank you for your clever approach.

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  5. davidmoolten15 October 2009 at 05:53

    I really like the idea of spam as progeny of the internet, and of spam both exulting and croaking. Dead on great perception, and use of the words.

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  6. Michelle Johnson15 October 2009 at 07:35

    a very creative piece. hope all is well.

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  7. Derrick15 October 2009 at 07:45

    Hi Gautami,

    This certainly sounds good to me!

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  8. Sarah15 October 2009 at 08:25

    I don't 'do' poetry, but this makes me want to...

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  9. mark15 October 2009 at 08:29

    I hope they don't hit you too hard.

    This make me smile. That alone makes it worthwhile...

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  10. Raven's Wing Poetry15 October 2009 at 08:40

    A meta-poem on the words themselves -- I liked the approach and enjoyed the read.

    -Nicole

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  11. Anonymous15 October 2009 at 09:09

    from Therese L. Broderick -- someone once told me that a good poem is one which works even if only the last words of each line are read. This poem passes that test very well! Read just these last words: internet...language...croak...vehement...together...rebrobates...me...low...before...hard

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  12. briarcat15 October 2009 at 09:32

    yep. you nailed it

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  13. Anonymous15 October 2009 at 10:27

    Namaste, you certainly were able to put all the Wordle together, something I found impossible to accomplish. Good rhythm too.
    Regards,
    DH

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  14. Paul Oakley15 October 2009 at 10:35

    I love your ending, Gautami:

    words need to cool down before
    exploded chelations hit me hard

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  15. Cynthia Short15 October 2009 at 14:26

    So impressed...you did it! I found the words impossible this week, yet you were able to string together the mass of them into something artistic...good for you!

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  16. RBroeker15 October 2009 at 16:38

    A thunder and lightning of words, crushing down on my late-night-brain, kicking away the romantic idea of a friendly moon. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  17. sage15 October 2009 at 19:59

    nice!

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  18. Julie Jordan Scott16 October 2009 at 08:21

    Wow. Not a single word left unspent, and so succinct as well! Bravo, Guatami

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  19. Wayne Pitchko16 October 2009 at 10:19

    nicely done Guatami...love that exploding ending...thanks for sharing

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  20. EKSwitaj16 October 2009 at 10:24

    I noticed that we both started with lines that read [adjective] [noun] of [noun]. I wonder if many others did and, if so, why.

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  21. Rajlakshmi16 October 2009 at 14:18

    quite impressive word choice...
    very well written

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  22. Zouxzoux16 October 2009 at 21:34

    Good job!

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  23. Rekha20 October 2009 at 00:16

    Very creative, nice read

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