‘Twas but a year ago, the moon shining bright,
(etched in my mind, so well);
strolled with my loved one in the orange light,
our voices intermingling like twinkling bells
Suddenly the moon grew dull.
My love seemed to have sprouted wings;
he appeared a face of a smirking skull
What I felt in my heart was a ghastly thing
Fantasy was it? For my love lay still
within my arms, his eyes aglow;
wondering why my lips were chilled.
Silently I pulled him closer, kissing him so
One year gone, the moon still bright.
Too bright, like a ghost of woe;
standing by a newly dug grave tonight
with a wrecked heart……….its bizarre you know.
Now that is some thing I can relate to ... :) Reminds me of days long gone but not forgotten. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeletereally well framed.. it's neat. i loved these...
ReplyDeleteFantasy was it? For my love lay still
within my arms, his eyes aglow;
wondering why my lips were chilled.
Silently I pulled him closer, kissing him so
Cheers,
Rohit. keep smiling :)
Wow...Touched straight here(* pointing to My heart* )wonderful...
ReplyDeleteMama Mia! A poet whose fav is Feynman! cool.
ReplyDeletefauzan: Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI hope you got over the sad memories!
Rohit: Well, I am trying my best to be a poetess! But all I write is sad stuff! Thanks!
demi goddezz: Me touched too by you!
jinguchakka: :) Yeah I love Physics!
Thanks much for dropping by..gr8 place u have here. Thoughts penned here moves me..
ReplyDeletewill b back for more :)
Thanks Φ,
ReplyDeleteWill look forward to your kind words!