Saturday, 12 November 2005

Longings


Filled with thoughts of you
Closed eyes dreaming you
Do you ever think of me?
Do you want to wait for me?
Does it matter I am afar?
So are the sun, moon and stars
Hurts so very deep I know
But I cannot seem to let go.
All that I want right now
To be with you, tell me how
Wishing for us to be together
Intense feelings lasting forever


Wrote this for a writing exercise but have not not posted it. Should I? It does not fare as a great love song though!
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4 comments:

  1. Just A Human13 November 2005 at 00:09

    Gautami,

    I guess a mind game is going on within - your poems echos your thoughts.

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  2. gautami tripathy13 November 2005 at 07:46

    Writing is catharsis!

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  3. Manoj14 November 2005 at 11:41

    Heard the same thing about writing our own 'obituary' as well :-)

    M.

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  4. gautami tripathy14 November 2005 at 11:45

    Oh,it seems I am getting repetitive!! Must think of smething new! Like, I am just plain crazy.......:)

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