“Yes.” Five years, two months, 7 days and 10 hours.
“How have you been?”
“Ok.”
“See you around.”
“Ok.” Her heart was breaking apart.
“Momma?” A little boy came running.
“ Is he mine?”
“Yes.”
“Will you marry me?”
“I will.”
They were in each other’s arms, kissing as never before.
Yeah.. stuff of fairy tales.
ReplyDeleteWO... love story good ending !!
ReplyDeleteAmazing! Keep writing, Gautami.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nayan,Darling and Flickering flame.
ReplyDeleteWanted to write a love story in shortest of words!
Did I succeed?
You sure did... but eh.. don't u think this story is a depicting 'him' a bit unromantic, while 'she' has all the best thoughts? ;)
ReplyDeleteHmmm.. a little bit though :)
ReplyDeleteMen do not express their feelings! They take a lot of time to open up to emotions.
ReplyDeleteAmazing!
ReplyDeleteSigh! Wish most of the people had your wisdom.
I would say this is one of the best 55 word stories ive read on the blogosphere recently...
ReplyDeleteThanks Nayan...:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ghost.....A love story is not what most guys like!
u make it ;***
ReplyDelete:)))))))
ReplyDeletei love happy endings!
ReplyDeleteMe too! But life is not always as we want it to be....
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