Saturday, 10 September 2011

invasion

you are not here-
you are here
my notebook knows
invisible words form there
emotions jump all over
spilling into my space

you invaded it, 
now refuse to let go

21 comments:

  1. i hope you see the other side of the invasion soon enough...smile.s

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  2. Great Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

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  3. I think I have said it in many more words a bit differently ..as usual.. but you amaze me always.. love reading you here..and thanks you fro a prompt that touched somewhere deep..

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  4. Must be very interesting words all over!! Did they march aggressively to invade or had grander plans and still live in hope?? ;)

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  5. A poem that can have meanings both dark and light.

    Larry

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  6. Someone poured wax on your notebook and it scatters feelings willy-nilly!
    Good one! Thanks.

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  7. That's some invasion you have going on there--very clever.

    Gayle ~

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  8. Thanks for such a fun prompt.
    Love your words, always so thought-provoking.

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  9. People do have a way of getting under one's skin.

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  10. Feels as bit like the impossibility of not breathing. Life. A chance to win. Love the last two lines.

    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  11. I can truely relate...it is the invisible words which can invade a person`s space...

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  12. our notebooks do know!
    they keep secrets too.

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  13. Very clever and interesting write. Nicely done!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/i-am-loved/

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  14. refreshing write! my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/04/09/summer-wind/

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  15. very well done and this can have a meaning in both side of light and dark
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/27/the-island-breeze/

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  16. Ah Tami so true but wonderful. Keep them close.


    Melanie

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