Friday, 4 February 2011

sinning through the skin

totally relaxed, I cling to you
my arms creep around you
but you clutch me tight
knowing I need that aftermath
our heightened senses linger in the room
golden hue of fantasy has become a reality
I again touch your glistening skin
you steal away my shallow breath

"I stay alive breathing through your skin"


  1. very sensual piece...wrapped in the skin of that other....

  2. I've noticed lately that your writing sounds like a woman in love, Gautami. The thought makes me smile - I hope it's true! :)

    A sweet, tender 55.

  3. Whew. Let me catch my breath. Great passionate 55.

  4. Yes, full of passion! And sounds like an understanding lover to me! :)

  5. Whew, from me too, very hot, beautiful. Your last line incredible.

  6. Gautami...
    This was very personal and sensual.
    Top Quality writing My Friend.
    I Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

  7. Liked the use of aftermath. Never heard it put that way. Creative.

  8. Sinning through...? I mean you are ending with the word 'Breathing through..' aren't they opposites...I am confused.. But poem..excellent..can's say anything on such a piece of pure passion..

    Would love you to visit for OSI tomorrow . it would be my 200th post.. I haven't forgotten what you call them.. dancing!!!

  9. whew, sexy. ;-)

    btw - someone wrote a comment on my blog asking how to subscribe to YOUR blog by way of e-mail. I made some suggestions but I don't know what client they use. I didn't see a "subscribe by e-mail" option here.

  10. This is really sensual and beautiful... oh I especially love that title... it says so much
    Great poem

  11. theaccidentalnovelist:

    I added that subscription by email button. Thanks for letting me know. I didn't realize that I don't have it.

  12. Wonderful, sweet moment. Good one, Gautami.