Sunday 5 December 2010

fairy tale

golden wings 
it stood there near that stream
creature so beautiful
I circled from it
it was gone
I felt an itch on my shoulder blades

had I turned to a fairy?

24 comments:

  1. Hi Gautami - this is very playful..I love the thought of itching for your fairy wings! Jae

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  2. Like the "itching on my shoulder blades". Nice atmosphere.

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  3. A spritely tale. Love this 160. Thanks for playing along.

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  4. Fairy wings itching on my shoulder... nice, playful piece.

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  5. haunting and thought provoking
    woke up my mind.

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  6. perhaps you had :) - nicely written 160

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  7. Inspired 160. I love the imagery you've created with so few words.

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  8. So sweet. What a fantastic dream.

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  9. one can hope. A faerie is a lovely thing to be. (I know!)

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  10. oh, name, url field?
    http://faystoo.blogspot.com/

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  11. ah how sweet - I think you have

    Hope you have a nice week ahead

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  12. I read the itching on your shoulders differently - that there was a fairly tapping you on the shoulder. Either way, I like the simplicity yet dreaminess of this piece.

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  13. This is truly wonderful gautami.. Thanks for stopping by my thoughts..

    --Someone is Special--

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  14. Magical 160, Gautami--loved your fairy tale.

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  15. a fairy would not necessarily be a bad thing to be...smiles.

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  16. Ooohhh... how cool would that be!!
    Watching Harry Potter(and the magical creatures in the movies) puts such ideas into my head...
    And now, your beautiful words made me feel it all over again...

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  17. Whenever you witness something unbelievably beautiful I am sure an itch is the very least response you could make. My own gasp of wonder and amazement would surely frighten it away.

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  18. I've been there...surprised by joy and longing. You wrote it so well.

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  19. amazing guidance entry.
    well put...

    From Sunday Scribbling.

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