Beautiful.. bleeding happiness and what flows is the joy of reading..here. on your page..well do visit to see new instant haikus both inspired ..one by Bill's page and another Rebecca's..
lovely words.Enjoyed it. Sunday 160
Bleeding happiness I like thatThanks and have a great start to your weekwish I could join you for the train more often just crazy busy best :)
This was fantastic...Loved your 160
A magnificent use of the 160 characters. Beautiful piece. Thanks for playing along with the Sunday 160.
Good poem, and how nicethat you could submit itto both Applehouse andG-Man. I like your styleand flow.
nice. bleeding happiness in spite of the cold and icicles...
Hmm, still trying to figure it out. Interesting images.
I am becoming a huge fan of your free verses, Gautami... And this poem really doubled the reason for my doing so... it's a beautiful 160!! May those icicles never affect the gush of bleeding happiness..
A lot of imagery to behold here. Lovely, prose!
Cold, cold, cold, like the end of true love. Beautifully put together.
Thanks for the support...your work is always well done.A++