Saturday 13 November 2010

echoing parenthesis

parenthesis meets its match
in apostrophe
I listen to echoes. 

after a drab October, 
the early November sunshine 
cast golden rays on comma

another absurdity

46 comments:

  1. Wonderfully done, I loved it :o)

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  2. An unusual but interesting use of the prompt line.

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  3. Quite unique and original for sure! This is microfiction to perfection.

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  4. Very clever and unexpected use of the prompt.
    Well done!
    Best wishes,
    Anna

    Anna's SC wk 28

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  5. Pared to the bone here and very interesting....

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  6. Very creative to see and hear what others do not. "Echoing Parenthesis" is a perfect title!

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  7. Nice! No question that the weather can affect the muse. Better to have that early November sunshine.

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  8. Great play with words, loved reading your poetry!

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  9. Shine of commas make all the difference.. well said Gautami..

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  10. Clever use of the puncuation marks used in your poetry.

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  11. This was really fun! Thank you!

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  12. Such an original take on the prompt. I really like this. Of course, being a Southerner, commas are my favorite punctuation mark :) Kat

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  13. I love the double meaning with punctuation

    Ha!!

    Nice 160

    mine is here

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  14. Loved this. Completely unique.

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  15. Gautami,

    Few days absence makes me lag so far behind,that when I read all I missed it boggles my mind,you write so well that when I read,to such a blissful satisfaction does it lead.

    Take care

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  16. Gautami,
    I really like this.
    Pamela

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  17. What a terrific Sunday 160. Thank you for playing. Be sure to post a comment on my site so others can follow back to you. I would want anyone to miss this.

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  18. some wonderful word play...love that is comes to the comma...or pause...

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  19. Your punctuation is impeccable!

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  20. Poetic license, creative and filled with charm.

    lovely 160 and more.

    cheers,
    joanny

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  21. Hmn, very very interesting thoughts! And the exclamation marks of cold cold winter to get our attention?

    xo

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  22. Very clever take on the prompt!

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  23. how clever this is the second poem I have read today that incorporated grammar/punctuation lots of fun to read this!

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  24. This could be a triple meme - Saturday Centus, FF55, and Sunday 160.

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  25. That was me just now. I was trying to put in my name when blogger suddenly swallowed it and post as "anonymous". Blogger hates me.

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  26. I love the personification of the punctuation marks--so clever. :0)
    Victoria

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  27. how cute! Thanks for visiting mine.

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  28. golden rays on comma...love it!!

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  29. Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.
    Old poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.
    Hope to see you there. Cheers!
    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html

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  30. Clever and unexpected! I personally never met a comma I didn't love. Like Kat, I'm from the South.

    Thanks for this post..........cj

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  31. Clever piece! Nice personification. I enjoyed reading it!

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  32. Holy Wow! This was lovely. Really, really an interesting use of the prompt.

    I was fascinated by this link.

    Thank you.

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