unbeatable gratitude poem.masterful job...don't forget to link some of your poems to potluck tonight,Happy Sunday!
very nice. you covered them all with a brilliant poemawesome
Gautami,I love this.Pamela
Nicely done but as always dark and dingy
This is lovely and painful.
Amazing piece cutting deep within the cosmos to find thoughts of appreciation.
this planetsince we arrived hereholds all our secretsLiked that part especially.
I like this, a real sense of the moment - life always follows us wherever we go :)
Loved the beauty of the opening lines, then the next few lines seemed hopeful :) and then ended a bit sad and painful :( Loved the way you have done this!!
your verse,strokes a life....
very intense I sense the beginning of an ending here....
Beauty entwined with a very intense ending! Well done!
love this poem Gautami...thanks for sharing
Wow, very dark write!
This is such a beautiful poem. Very nice.
oh this was so intense...!! i love it!
Delicate and beautiful..like a watercolour..Jae
Great poem.You got some strong imagery there.Nice job
Fantastic and beautiful..."the painting will not be an antidoteof your bloodied pastit would rather enhance your instinctwhen your blade cut across bodies"...Nice... :)