Wonderfully done, I loved it :o)
An unusual but interesting use of the prompt line.
So unique and fun! Perfect!
This one pleases me.=D
Quite unique and original for sure! This is microfiction to perfection.
Very clever and unexpected use of the prompt.Well done!Best wishes,AnnaAnna's SC wk 28
Pared to the bone here and very interesting....
Very creative to see and hear what others do not. "Echoing Parenthesis" is a perfect title!
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Nice! No question that the weather can affect the muse. Better to have that early November sunshine.
Great play with words, loved reading your poetry!
Shine of commas make all the difference.. well said Gautami..
last line made me smile. Thanks.
Clever use of the puncuation marks used in your poetry.
This was really fun! Thank you!
That was cleverly done.
a fresh take on the prompt!
Such an original take on the prompt. I really like this. Of course, being a Southerner, commas are my favorite punctuation mark :) Kat
I love the double meaning with punctuationHa!!Nice 160mine is here
Loved this. Completely unique.
Gautami,Few days absence makes me lag so far behind,that when I read all I missed it boggles my mind,you write so well that when I read,to such a blissful satisfaction does it lead.Take care
Gautami,I really like this.Pamela
What a terrific Sunday 160. Thank you for playing. Be sure to post a comment on my site so others can follow back to you. I would want anyone to miss this.
some wonderful word play...love that is comes to the comma...or pause...
Comma is very happy.
Your punctuation is impeccable!
Poetic license, creative and filled with charm.lovely 160 and more.cheers,joanny
Hmn, very very interesting thoughts! And the exclamation marks of cold cold winter to get our attention?xo
Very clever take on the prompt!
how clever this is the second poem I have read today that incorporated grammar/punctuation lots of fun to read this!
This could be a triple meme - Saturday Centus, FF55, and Sunday 160.
That was me just now. I was trying to put in my name when blogger suddenly swallowed it and post as "anonymous". Blogger hates me.
I love the personification of the punctuation marks--so clever. :0)Victoria
how cute! Thanks for visiting mine.
golden rays on comma...love it!!
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Clever and unexpected! I personally never met a comma I didn't love. Like Kat, I'm from the South.Thanks for this post..........cj
Clever piece! Nice personification. I enjoyed reading it!
Holy Wow! This was lovely. Really, really an interesting use of the prompt.I was fascinated by this link.Thank you.