Wednesday 14 October 2009

exulting mixture













irresistible progeny of internet
uses exulting language
vowelized words croak
capricious, insolent, vehement
do these work together?
cosmoranic rebrobates
sounds good to me
I let the investment lie low
words need to cool down before
exploded chelations hit me hard

23 comments:

  1. Oh yeah love the cosmoranic rebrobates lol great great expression

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  2. Compacted, concise and creative. The mixture works
    Gautami. Thank you for your clever approach.

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  3. I really like the idea of spam as progeny of the internet, and of spam both exulting and croaking. Dead on great perception, and use of the words.

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  4. a very creative piece. hope all is well.

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  5. Hi Gautami,

    This certainly sounds good to me!

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  6. I don't 'do' poetry, but this makes me want to...

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  7. I hope they don't hit you too hard.

    This make me smile. That alone makes it worthwhile...

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  8. A meta-poem on the words themselves -- I liked the approach and enjoyed the read.

    -Nicole

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  9. from Therese L. Broderick -- someone once told me that a good poem is one which works even if only the last words of each line are read. This poem passes that test very well! Read just these last words: internet...language...croak...vehement...together...rebrobates...me...low...before...hard

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  10. Namaste, you certainly were able to put all the Wordle together, something I found impossible to accomplish. Good rhythm too.
    Regards,
    DH

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  11. I love your ending, Gautami:

    words need to cool down before
    exploded chelations hit me hard

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  12. So impressed...you did it! I found the words impossible this week, yet you were able to string together the mass of them into something artistic...good for you!

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  13. A thunder and lightning of words, crushing down on my late-night-brain, kicking away the romantic idea of a friendly moon. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  14. Wow. Not a single word left unspent, and so succinct as well! Bravo, Guatami

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  15. nicely done Guatami...love that exploding ending...thanks for sharing

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  16. I noticed that we both started with lines that read [adjective] [noun] of [noun]. I wonder if many others did and, if so, why.

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  17. quite impressive word choice...
    very well written

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