Love the way you did this, it reminds me of: Summers coming and she's twenty eight bags of sugar overweight THE BEACH CAN'T WAIT Every day at the gym, bikini fits now she can swim
Hi Gautami, a quick fix, perhaps? Thanks for posting this...-Andy
lo lI totally love this ;)
lol..Lovely wordplay there..specially the splitology at the end..Good one!.Do try the newer form with the structure reduced to 5 lines..its really more fun..Thanks to andy again!
Loved it! There's something inferently playful about this form, I think.
a unique one!!
Great advice in here, and another cool form. I admire your discipline in being able to tackle these forms!
Wonderful! I can see where these could get addictive...
I like this... we often face our own cross-roads. a moments paws to look both waysthe cat crosses_m
WOW, you are mstering the concept here ... I'm sure you are going to write more of these and charm us!!Kudos ...
Ah a new way of doing it! I might try this too :D
Same words, different meaning - I like that.
good advice. :)
i can tell you're having fun with these. and it shows!
Tami, that was a wonderful dhama buddy kind of poem. well done.