Just love this :D
There always seems to be something preventing us from realising our desires.
So few words, so much meaning.
Hi Gautami, 'It's always greener on the other side' - springs to mind.
whoa! beauty in brevity!
your verse always touches me - I love the bittersweet, which you express so well.
Delightful in its succinctness.
Oh dear girl, I do love this one woo hoo
I like the simplicity of this. I want to know more about the 'you' who is expedient and nihilistic.
so precisely true !
That's quite a chasm you've described, and the frustration is evident - nice work!
I like this! Very poignant for today's society
Strong and passionate loss.
I love the line breaks, very well written.
Wow, that's poem packs power.
Wow, a 500-word essay couldn't have said as much as your little 20-word poem!Lots of agony in here!
The simplicity of this is gorgeous.
How true, looks like I will be around for a little while longer.
Would make an interesting bumper sticker!
Just jumped onto your poetry blog and I love it.Beautiful.
Beautifully expressed. Wonderful!
wow! short and powerful and so often so true!
Oh, Guatami. This is incredible.I *might* change expedient to expedience, but it is yours. A beautiful poem.
Hmm really loved the way it ends!!good goin girl!!