sleepy awake stateso much caffeine in my body,am now living dead
Well said, I think I know just what you mean! It can even happen without caffeine - if you push yourself too far, it's like you go into a kind of overdrive and can't sleep even though you're way behind on sleep. A sort of zombie like state...In fact I wish I could get to that right now because I am zonked!
Ha! I know this feeling only too well. :-)
How fun- a caffiene induced haiku! Looks like a messy drinker, too. How fun- a caffeine induced haiku! Looks like a messy drinker, too.
i like it!
I'm this way every day!! Good work. :)
i have given up coffee completelyit was quite easyi've not had a cup now for almost ten minutes :)
percival: I have been in that state too many times. When I am dead beat, I can't sleep! Like they say too tired to sleep, too tired to stay awake. Zombie!
richard: yes! Familiar feeling, isn't it?
get zapped: Actually. it is not a haiku in the strict sense. Senryu, yes!Aren't the cups lovely?:D
sage: thanks! But what is it you like? Coffee or my verse..:D
andrew: Hey, too much coffee is bad!Moderate it!floots: How have you survived so long?:D
Yep, been there too!!
There's supposed to be an intermediate state: dreaming awake. Coffee is belived to have been used first by dervishes of Soutern Arabia, to keep them awake in their all-nigth rituals. When I can't sleep due to too much coffee, I feel like a dervish - a poor man on his way to freedom, but that's about all there is to my dervishhood!:)
i luv coffee
:) great feeling!
well composed.the funny thing is, if i drink coffee in the evening i get so sleepy i'm no good for any company :)
coffeezombies :)coffee & poetry --could we live without either?nice piece, gautami/t.
If drinking does that to you (inspires you), by all means drink more of the stuff! Nice haiku.
hehe not bad at all Gautami!Keshi.
well-said...this reminded me of drinking too much of coffee...
You should try drinking beer.........geeeeeezzzzzzzzz
Coffe make me get migrain, and dry mouth. sad.
Pat: yes!borut: I know what you mean but dancing dervishes are in a translike state, spirituality embodiesd. Mine was much too basic.kai: who does'nt?magiceye: :-)polona: My mom feels the same was you after drinking coffee./t: most do! They are the nerds who don't understand poetry.rethabile: Thanks! I will!keshi: thanks girl.amalendu: You too?whitesnake: send me a few cans!Ghost: you are a ghost. What else can one expect?
oh that was wonderful! a perfect little coffee haiku!
coffe does that to me too!
LOL, I love it! This could be me! :)
with that much caffeine in my body, i will be dead dead. :)
Thanks ascend,crafty, lotus and dsnake1.Coffee seems to bind us all.
Well, here's a tea haiku, much better for you! ;-)new yearI drink assam tea in bedand drizzle morningAlan Summers