the cut shell makes a naughty sound
wonderful tactic to distract me
that rotation is not the zenith
even though I know its importance
what lay on that deserted ground?
why did you look so forlorn
lying with your feet crossed at the ankles;
nonchalance that reached out to my soul
I wanted to hold on to the slices;
to focus onto the unrelenting elements
"the point is broken, I hold the frustum
staring into an unforeseen future"
I love how you used the shell as a vehicle to measure your view~
ReplyDeleteWell Done!
Happy New Year
frustum... love it
ReplyDeleteYour beautiful writing always reaches deep to touch the senses far beyond our imaginings and leads us into a different world.
ReplyDeleteThought provoking and beautifully written Gautami! :-)
ReplyDeleteAn interesting perspective. Good one!
ReplyDeletevisual and the words went so well giving a loud thought.Happy New year!
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery leading to the conclusion of an unknown future.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery leading to the conclusion of an unknown future.
ReplyDeleteHaving the tip missing can trip you up.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of three words. Please read my attempt.
Interesting.
ReplyDeleteoh, love the rhyming, smiles.
ReplyDeleteA great perspective you used there...quite creative.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem. I love the imagery of the cut shell.
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