Sunday, 18 December 2011

citizen of dreamland

I circled the purple
a game I played
as luck would have it
I had no trouble winning
my dream allow me to be flexible
I become a citizen of one the states of dreamland
far beyond earth, earth year
I don't lag behind
as I now fly wingless
no friction to curtail me

"happenstance?"
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22 comments:

  1. flaubert18 December 2011 at 13:26

    Nice, Gautami. Concise and pretty.

    Pamela

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  2. zongrik18 December 2011 at 16:27

    circle the purple, that's an interesting game, could be taken many ways.

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  3. Marianne18 December 2011 at 18:41

    Love your title and I like the idea of flying wingless!

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  4. Laurie Kolp19 December 2011 at 06:33

    Love the title... a great piece!

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  5. Sheila Moore19 December 2011 at 07:48

    no friction to curtail me - I like that!

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  6. turtlememoir19 December 2011 at 08:03

    a citizen of dreamland - I like it, and the idea of flying wingless...

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  7. Marbles in My Pocket19 December 2011 at 13:01

    Awesome! Fly free!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/

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  8. Sherry Blue Sky19 December 2011 at 13:23

    I love "citizen of dreamland"...lovely.

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  9. brenda w19 December 2011 at 15:57

    No friction, indeed! Abstract and playful.

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  10. lynnaima19 December 2011 at 17:04

    happenstance in dream land, yes possible and true :)
    happy gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/

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  11. Kay L. Davies19 December 2011 at 19:34

    Lovely! Flying wingless does sound wonderful.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  12. :-Dee20 December 2011 at 05:38

    'Citizen of dreamland' - I am one too!!! This was a good read.. and so fresh!!! :)

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  13. Bar None Publishing Group20 December 2011 at 05:44

    At this time of year we are all citizens of Dreamland.
    Cheers,
    Mark Butkus

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  14. Brian Miller21 December 2011 at 03:52

    i got a few dreams i would not mind inhabiting...

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  15. Claudia21 December 2011 at 07:41

    isn't it great to become a citizen of dreamland every once and a while..flying wingless...nice..

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  16. vivinfrance21 December 2011 at 08:32

    In dreamland, anything is possible. Good poem.

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  17. Traci B21 December 2011 at 09:20

    I enjoyed this read; I've often dreamed of flying wingless and dancing on air. Something I often wish I could do in our physical reality.

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  18. Raven's Wing Poetry21 December 2011 at 13:07

    I have always wanted to fly, but I kept envisioning myself with wings. You trumped me on this one. Beautiful, Guatami.

    -Nicole

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  19. skyraft21 December 2011 at 16:57

    Many great lines here. And "flying wingless" is just an amazing concept.

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  20. Morning22 December 2011 at 07:11

    lovely.

    Happy Holidays.

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  21. 5thsister23 December 2011 at 05:02

    Oooooh. Love it! Dreams are my thing and I've begun flying wingless as well! As a full fledged citizen of the Land of Dreams, I welcome you!

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  22. G-Man23 December 2011 at 06:51

    Miss Gautami...?
    The missing Gautami?
    Loved your 55 Dream Girl
    Thanks for playing, thanks for remembering, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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