Thursday, 15 April 2010

saintly mind gets lubricated

brash words on that message board
crash to the ground
like a saint you stand there
listening to the reverberating sound
it is your doing or undoing
(have it your own way,
think what you like)
one by one, everyone walks away
you stand there alienated

if only you had lubricated your mind
you wouldn't put those words out there
and suffered because of it

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There has been no end to my PC woes. I desperately need a new one and looking for the best offer. Until then my appearances would be sporadic. What else can you expect, when I am using my nephew's PC! Until I get a new computer, please bear with me.
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13 comments:

  1. Lorraine15 April 2010 at 07:40

    Well put, I've learned the lesson, there's only you!!! good luck with the comp, I'll check on you every now and then ;)

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  2. sage15 April 2010 at 08:01

    I like the poem--hope you get your computer woes solved soon--its a pain when the computer doesn't cooperate!

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  3. briarcat15 April 2010 at 11:34

    that is woeful. not the poem, the situation. My laptop died a couple of months back and I realized that I'm addicted

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  4. ThomG15 April 2010 at 11:41

    There's a lot of truth in this one. I like the message.

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  5. Wayne Pitchko15 April 2010 at 13:06

    nicely done Guatami

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  6. Dee Martin15 April 2010 at 13:51

    Hope your computer problems are solved soon - we miss you when you don't post! Loved the poem - learning to use the brain before opening the mouth is a hard lesson :)

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  7. one more believer15 April 2010 at 14:37

    oh man this is painfully true.. guilty maybe once or twice or least.... love the images of those words... and the best to you of finding a working computer...

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  8. Amity15 April 2010 at 21:00

    Hi Gautami;

    cute and nice piece this is! message is an honest to goodness expression of reality!

    re: ur lappy, oh I cant survive a day without it!

    i could feel your woes, too!

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  9. Ramesh Sood16 April 2010 at 01:40

    Don't know if you are talking to yourself or someone else.. I will have my way and think.. you are talking to yourself.. in that case..hats off to you.. it's curageous and therefore beautiful..

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  10. donn16 April 2010 at 09:12

    It is a machine afterall and even though they seem "magical", they do wear out.

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  11. Bill17 April 2010 at 12:13

    Good luck.

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  12. Andy Sewina18 April 2010 at 14:44

    Phew, Nicely Gautami, this machine is knackered too, but it's better than the one I was using before, hope you can resolve your probs soon.

    Congrats on your 100th follower!

    <3 Andy

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  13. Americanising Desi21 April 2010 at 02:34

    hope the cure is here now :)

    http://fart-in-a-jar.blogspot.com/2010/04/saintly-satisfaction.html

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