This plays over and over in my head as I read it. I like the feeling.
So darn clever. Love how you used the words
We all wonder that.bhttp://torristravels.blogspot.com/2010/04/global-warmingwho-cares-trashing.html
A lot said in those three lines. I can relate very well.
An important question. Clever.
Sounds like she needs to practice, "To thine own self be true," once in a while.
This is nice!Pamela
It's the challenge that shows you care.
What an excellent haiku about the give and take nature of relationships.
Yes, you shouldn't... very well expressed..
The inner voice is crying out to be heard, you love 'him' more than your very self!<3
really. why...I adore this
one way relationship - I think a little flooding instead of ebbing may be in order!
very nice ... i loved the 1st 2 lines .... the last line (the 1 containing 'ebb') seemed a bit different in emotions
Deepa, that is exactly my intent.
Hello:)Thank you very much for your comment on my blog! I love how you used those three words and spun it into something so simple...into something that made me want to read it over and over again.
Dwelling on random emotions, this is a smart haiku and as others have said, an important and easy to relate question.
Very poignant and powerful piece. -Tim
A strong resonance in this piece! Powerful work.
So simple yet succinct and beautiful
because i like to,because i love to, because i want to, because i feel to need to,...
Perfect and very to the point.
It touches the chord somewhere deep within the heart...
This plays over and over in my head as I read it. I like the feeling.
ReplyDeleteSo darn clever. Love how you used the words
ReplyDeleteWe all wonder that.
ReplyDeleteb
http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2010/04/global-warmingwho-cares-trashing.html
A lot said in those three lines. I can relate very well.
ReplyDeleteAn important question. Clever.
ReplyDeleteSounds like she needs to practice, "To thine own self be true," once in a while.
ReplyDeleteThis is nice!
ReplyDeletePamela
It's the challenge that shows you care.
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent haiku about the give and take nature of relationships.
ReplyDeleteYes, you shouldn't... very well expressed..
ReplyDeleteThe inner voice is crying out to be heard, you love 'him' more than your very self!
ReplyDelete<3
really. why...I adore this
ReplyDeleteone way relationship - I think a little flooding instead of ebbing may be in order!
ReplyDeletevery nice ... i loved the 1st 2 lines .... the last line (the 1 containing 'ebb') seemed a bit different in emotions
ReplyDeleteDeepa, that is exactly my intent.
ReplyDeleteHello:)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your comment on my blog!
I love how you used those three words and spun it into something so simple...into something that made me want to read it over and over again.
Dwelling on random emotions, this is a smart haiku and as others have said, an important and easy to relate question.
ReplyDeleteVery poignant and powerful piece.
ReplyDelete-Tim
A strong resonance in this piece! Powerful work.
ReplyDeleteSo simple yet succinct and beautiful
ReplyDeletebecause i like to,
ReplyDeletebecause i love to,
because i want to,
because i feel to need to,...
Perfect and very to the point.
ReplyDeleteIt touches the chord somewhere deep within the heart...
ReplyDelete