before I feel you,
I feel the tease of your breath
on my neck-
I close my eyes
suck in my breath,
at the soft touch of you on my shoulder.
you understand my shyness-
your movements are unhurried;
your passion generates fire in me
in that mist of desire
my meager protest disappears
I turn towards you eagerly...
in the aftermath,
you snuggle into my back
and say, "that wasn't difficult, was it?"
cherishing the closeness-
smiling I fall asleep
dreaming of you, of us.
Hands-down beautiful. A hint of erotica, but feeling the love.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words today.
ReplyDeletePhew, you know too much!
ReplyDelete<3
absolutely lovely... oh, so lovely.
ReplyDeleteSo simple yet powerful! You honor the everydayness of love.
ReplyDeleteSharing your sensuality with the world. Nice. (Are you going to enter the Silly Poetry Contest? Your scathing wit is highly anticipated.) :)
ReplyDeletethis was romantic. I like the word shyness it shows hesitation and anticipation.
ReplyDeletethen eager jumps in...
then there is love in snuggle and sleep
this is just right.
Not nuts...very, very sane and alive!
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That was beautiful!!!
ReplyDelete(nope - not nuts at all)
'Better than sex' is such a widely mis-used phrase.
ReplyDeleteLoved it and the title is perfect too.
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWow, splendid!
ReplyDeleteI like it, so intimate yet discrete
ReplyDeleteThank you, G.
ReplyDeleteLovely and romantic!
ReplyDeleteRomantic and tender. Nice.
ReplyDeleteand that very rush..makes it all worth living for with all the troubles..
ReplyDeletethe title is everything g!!!!
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