Tuesday, 12 January 2010

WHATEVER! CUT OUT THOSE RIBBONS

I can't have mercy
I can't let it be
i can't let it go
I will mess with you
to monstrous extremity
with zeal, I will jolt you
WHATEVER! CUT OUT THOSE RIBBONS
jolted by my zeal-
extremely monstrous
this mess that you create
you have to let it go
but I can't let it be
as I never learnt mercy

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A taunt thrown for Sir Silley!

15 comments:

  1. Hi Gautami, many thanks for posting to The NaiSaiKu challenge?

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  2. Harsh words beautifully written.

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  3. You know, the more times I read this, the more power I see combined in JOLT and ZEAL.

    Thank you, Guatami.

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  4. Demonstrates revenge perfectly

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  5. Gautami my dear, if ye would consort less with truckers from the Bronx who reek of gasoline then Poesy might fall from thy hand that was lady-like and demure as becomes a member of your Dainty sex.

    Anthony, Thom, Julie, Pia: Pooh.

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  6. Great revenge piece...laughter abounded, and for that, I thank you!

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  7. Yikes. That'll teach him to tangle with you!

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  8. Oh, I like the strength I see here! You go!

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  9. you are kicking some serious poetic butt now girl!

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  10. I love the second half of this, where you turn it all around. So clever!

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