You manage the Monday Poetry Train, right? I've got another post for today, not a poem. There is an informal contest on another site and I've posted info about it.
If you think it's appropriate, would you consider posting it i the comments on Monday's Train? If not, don't worry about it. Hope you'll consider writing for it.
that glass of Guinness-
ReplyDeleteinsight into it suddenly:
uncannily cause no can
Maelstrom or ripple...?
ReplyDeleteThis made me thirsty...lol. Great haiku!
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteKeats's name was written in water.
ReplyDeleteYou manage the Monday Poetry Train, right? I've got another post for today, not a poem. There is an informal contest on another site and I've posted info about it.
ReplyDeletehttp://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2010/02/01/word-of-the-month-poems-contest/
If you think it's appropriate, would you consider posting it i the comments on Monday's Train? If not, don't worry about it. Hope you'll consider writing for it.
Like what you see in the water!
Lovely haiku, Guatami. It's title twists it to another place.
ReplyDeleteLove how the title gives a certain ironic twist to see that persona as an illusion of sorts! Lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThose who bombard our thoughts also take form in our water swirls. I know some people like that who live in my coffee cup.
ReplyDeleteFun writing, my friend.
A vision, I like that.
ReplyDeleteA vision, I like that.
ReplyDeleteI like the immediacy of this haiku.
ReplyDeleteSsndy, Sandy: Double vision - have you considered trifocals?
ReplyDeleteMake no bones about it! There's a wet reality in this!!
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jeeez, sometimes it's just all about them...everywhere...
ReplyDeleteA nice one Tami. You linked them all at once. Love it.
ReplyDeleteMelanie
good word and image play, I like how "suddenly uncannily" swirl together...
ReplyDeleteI agree that glass of water made me thirsty. Nice!
ReplyDeletePamela
nice haiku Gautami..it is always about whats in the glass...cheers
ReplyDeleteLoved staring into your glass...
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