Sunday, 8 March 2009

twister








tingling tongue
tantalised by
TANGY ORANGE-
now traumatised
the tongue tingles

Also go join the NaisaiKu Challenge.
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15 comments:

  1. anthonynorth9 March 2009 at 02:25

    I can feel the thirst.

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  2. Susan Helene Gottfried9 March 2009 at 05:33

    My brain is tingling, too!

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  3. Fledgling Poet9 March 2009 at 05:54

    My tongue tingled when I read this out loud...good one!

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  4. Lorraine9 March 2009 at 07:54

    Fantastic flow and so sweet lol you have a way with words ;)

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  5. Julia Smith9 March 2009 at 08:33

    Tantalised and traumatised - even our taste buds live dramatic lives.

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  6. Linda Jacobs9 March 2009 at 13:16

    I like how you changed the repetitions to keep it fresh!

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  7. Magyar9 March 2009 at 15:55

    walking
    through the forest
    rain
    MY FEET ARE WET
    through
    the forest rain
    walking

    The T's ToTaly Tangled.

    Interesting! _m

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  8. Tumblewords:9 March 2009 at 19:57

    I like the tantalising tingles - it's so vivid, it sparkles.

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  9. Stan Ski9 March 2009 at 20:14

    The 'T's make this work so well!

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  10. littlekhargosh10 March 2009 at 00:53

    i like this :)
    tingles when seduced. tingles when traumatized.

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  11. totomai10 March 2009 at 07:32

    satisfied thirsts. loved the t sounds

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  12. Whitesnake10 March 2009 at 22:22

    terribly teffic tongue twisting tone!

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  13. sweet talking guy11 March 2009 at 15:35

    Tingling tongue twister! Love it Gautami!

    Third attempt at posting....

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  14. theaccidentalnovelist12 March 2009 at 11:37

    making my rounds late on the train... still haven't tried the naisaiKu. sounds like fun.

    tingling in vancouver...

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  15. firebird17 March 2009 at 17:58

    I love tongue twisters-- this one is special for its effect on the tongue even by reading it silently! Very, very clever, as your poems always are--love this one.

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