Saturday, 5 July 2008

defining boundaries


Photo Credits: Rick Mobbs











space
aura surrounding me
unseen but built like a wall
intangibility of it pervades you too
you can break bricks
however
how does one demolish something
which is invisible
you can't define the boundaries
yet one can let the other break it
allowing to enter it with own free will

"can any one predict where
chance might lead this encounter?"
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18 comments:

  1. sage5 July 2008 at 09:45

    I love that painting and your words have me pondering...

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  2. Tammy5 July 2008 at 14:50

    I'm reading science into this and I'd love to know the answer to that question. HUG

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  3. Pam5 July 2008 at 15:29

    This poem seems to lead my thoughts to physical and nonphysical things. "How does one demolish something
    which is invisible"? Maybe with just a whisper?

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  4. Steve5 July 2008 at 15:51

    those that dare, win.
    there are no such things as walls to protect you. Someone somewhere will wall through them and you wont even know it.....

    chnace might lead this encounter?

    It already has.

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  5. danni5 July 2008 at 16:29

    invisible boundaries are easily breached with but a slip of the tongue --- i enjoyed this piece - it can go so many different ways --- it's a chance encounter!!!

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  6. Saoirse Redgrave5 July 2008 at 21:35

    Very well written (as always). What a powerful way to end it, too.

    Glad I stopped by!
    ~Saoirse

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  7. Lucy6 July 2008 at 07:42

    love does break down barriers. Love this poem so much. thanks for visiting me and leading me to it.
    :)

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  8. Robin6 July 2008 at 07:44

    I like this - barriers at once both impenetrable and fragile.

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  9. lucy6 July 2008 at 07:44

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  10. Shadow6 July 2008 at 08:07

    beautifully said...

    i can identify with that

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  11. ThomG6 July 2008 at 08:10

    "You can break bricks..." Love it.

    The Donnelly Plan

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  12. Jan6 July 2008 at 08:53

    sometimes that which we can't see can be destroyed more easily than tangible things. interesting and thought-provoking!

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  13. arboleda6 July 2008 at 10:52

    free will...mmm sometimes it is difficult to handle when facing some special encounters! I love your writing!

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  14. Noah the Great6 July 2008 at 11:12

    I really love this. You're an awesome writer, Gautami!

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  15. Devil Mood6 July 2008 at 14:18

    Wow, profound thoughts there!
    I think this will be one of those invisible-wall-breaking-encounters ;)

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  16. polona7 July 2008 at 09:53

    invisible tools can break invisible walls...
    love this

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  17. Jennifer Hicks7 July 2008 at 15:33

    space and the invasion or protection of it... yes what a concept. well done!

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  18. one more believer10 July 2008 at 10:36

    walls and barriers..allowing to enter... free will... thought provoking stuff g...

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