Wednesday 15 June 2011

whispering ocean

















trapped in it
whispers of air
prefer to stay put
rivulets of thready thought
grip me 
I want to escape
into the endless ocean

"isolated, I let strawberry tickle me
while storms breaks in within,
maybe I prefer to be within the stones of time"

20 comments:

  1. I find your words soothing.

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  2. Very calming.
    Lovely use of the prompts.

    *I've nominated you for a blogger award*
    http://renthewriter.blogspot.com/2011/06/gobsmacked-blogger-award.html

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  3. Great result from combining the two prompts!
    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/15/blessed-connection/

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  4. interesting take on sound and words. Like the way they played each other. Thank you for sharing it.

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  5. Very good - one can smell the ozone and the sea-weed.

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  6. Both poems are very nice--I especially like the first. I am mostly posting here this summer: http://jeff-ridingrails.blogspot.com/ Check out my latest post about a Buddhist and a Hindu temple in Indonesia

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  7. I love the endless ocean. Very lovely.

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  8. I love the little strawberry addendum. It conjures up strawberry ice cream in my mind.

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  9. wish for the sea seeing,
    wow.

    you have captured the desire of a shell stuck on beach perfectly.
    :)

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  10. Ah, the powers of the oceans of the world. Beautifully stated.

    Namaste..........cj

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  11. This has a lovely serenity to it.

    =)

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  12. Being a water person, found this intrigingly lovely.

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  13. Very nice ;-) Looking at that shell and reading your poem...sublime...Peace and blessings

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  14. That picture was the perfect illustration for these lovely words.

    The ebb and flow of your word crafting always pulls me in...

    ...and then releases me...

    ...and I am richer for having been priviledged to read your words.

    Thank you.

    A+

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  15. Simply gorgeous prose...Excellent..."rivulets of thready thought" Love that !!!

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