Concise and revealing. Much life in your short poem—from revelry to birds and bees.
I love the picture and I think we can all learn from those fruits and veggies getting along:-)
It does have punch!
I like it. Short n to the point. Colorful and entertaining.http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/my-andela.html
glad to see fruits dance,Cheers.well done,
Shows oneness even in fruits and veggies....colorful...artistic...and powerful theme!
Yummy and begging for more...
I'd like to find fruit in a blind alley :)
Oh how fun!! :-)
I love "Blind alley" this is a lovely slice of life poem beautifully done
Something a little different for you, I think. Nicely done.
very nice, fun, and imaginative! made me cheered....!
Jingle appreciates your support to our poetry potluck. Our week 41 Theme is: Saints, Monks, and Meditations, Yet, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome… ;)Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!Looking forward to seeing U on Sunday, 8pm or later.Stay Blessed,Love and hugs.xoxox
Charming poem...brought a smile to me. Like your live visitors feed, too. I had never seen that before. Hugs, pat
very delightful poem!!
Enjoyable and fun...
title made me smile, but you always have let your words talk. Good one.