Monday 20 June 2011

fruits dance on the walls

picture credit: Chris Galford














in a blind alley
I find fruits
dancing with each other
drinking their health
butterfly steps out
when bees sting
I write graffiti
on walls

"do knock it down"

20 comments:

  1. Concise and revealing. Much life in your short poem—from revelry to birds and bees.

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  2. I love the picture and I think we can all learn from those fruits and veggies getting along:-)

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  3. I like it. Short n to the point. Colorful and entertaining.

    http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/my-andela.html

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  4. glad to see fruits dance,
    Cheers.

    well done,

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  5. Shows oneness even in fruits and veggies....colorful...artistic...and powerful theme!

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  6. Yummy and begging for more...

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  7. I'd like to find fruit in a blind alley :)

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  8. I love "Blind alley" this is a lovely slice of life poem beautifully done

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  9. Something a little different for you, I think. Nicely done.

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  10. very nice, fun, and imaginative! made me cheered....!

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  11. Jingle appreciates your support to our poetry potluck.
    Our week 41 Theme is: Saints, Monks, and Meditations,
    Yet, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome… ;)
    Always, your poetry is sunshine to us!
    Looking forward to seeing U on Sunday, 8pm or later.
    Stay Blessed,
    Love and hugs.
    xoxox

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  12. Charming poem...brought a smile to me. Like your live visitors feed, too. I had never seen that before. Hugs, pat

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  13. title made me smile, but you always have let your words talk. Good one.

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