it's strong end "acrid summer/pavid a way for you". Like :)
Quite a longing within this 160. Thanks for playing.
beautiful.bless your Sunday.
I love "acrid summer".
Such beautiful words!I love how you heap them all together!
Dear Guatami: Yes this is deep! Will try to be more 3d! I watch acrid summerpaving a way for youSensing being part of a dimension shift soon to be what with the flat aspect of past personae stamped out and all. As you recreate from the abundant light a radiating dimensional 360 turn it around. Totally onto this!
acrid summer ... paving a way for you .... very beautiful.
"Acrid summer" is fabulous deep and powerful poem
WoW - a true slice of observational thought. Bravo.
Beautiful image, filled with yearning. I love this piece.
Love the light touch of words that go so deep and say so much. As usual, you have created a profound statement with seeming ease.This is beautiful Gautami,Elizabeth
Like everyone's saying, that last image of summer paving the way is killer. Short and sweet!
The whole poem moves. Well done.
Succinct piece of observation, Gautami.Pamela
everyone has said it all....thnaks for this Gautami
Walking towards the light sounds good to me. ♥
a beautiful spiritual touch to this poem.