Monday 27 June 2011

radiating rays

I expect you to walk out
towards light
radiating rays go outwards
never to converge
I watch acrid summer
paving a way for you

"come walk out from that photo"

19 comments:

  1. it's strong end "acrid summer/pavid a way for you". Like :)

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  2. Quite a longing within this 160. Thanks for playing.

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  3. beautiful.

    bless your Sunday.

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  4. Such beautiful words!
    I love how you heap them all together!

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  5. Dear Guatami: Yes this is deep! Will try to be more 3d!

    I watch acrid summer
    paving a way for you

    Sensing being part of a dimension shift soon to be what with the flat aspect of past personae stamped out and all. As you recreate from the abundant light a radiating dimensional 360 turn it around. Totally onto this!

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  6. acrid summer ... paving a way for you .... very beautiful.

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  7. "Acrid summer" is fabulous deep and powerful poem

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  8. WoW - a true slice of observational thought. Bravo.

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  9. Beautiful image, filled with yearning. I love this piece.

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  10. Love the light touch of words that go so deep and say so much. As usual, you have created a profound statement with seeming ease.This is beautiful Gautami,

    Elizabeth

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  11. Like everyone's saying, that last image of summer paving the way is killer. Short and sweet!

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  12. The whole poem moves. Well done.

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  13. Succinct piece of observation, Gautami.

    Pamela

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  14. everyone has said it all....thnaks for this Gautami

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  15. Walking towards the light sounds good to me. ♥

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  16. a beautiful spiritual touch to this poem.

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