Friday 24 June 2011

the middle is what we are

picture credit: Alison Jardine





















I see a crack
a minor thing though
yet a line that disturbs me
you may dot the face
you can't gag the mind
it will fly free
even with thousand bonds
why maintain a travesty of gaiety?
go as deep as coral
or as high as sky

but do not omit the necessary middle

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I completed 6 years of blogging and as always forgot to mention it here. I have come a long way from June 23, 2005. I have more than 1000 posts here. Maybe I need new ventures. Let's see.

22 comments:

  1. you may dot the face
    you can't gag the mind...

    whew, love those two lines...happy friday!

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  2. Dear Guatami: "Why maintain a travesty of gaiety" when one "omits the necessary middle". The gut (the middle) where the heart of repressed feelings stay unless freed to

    go as deep as coral
    or as high as sky

    Meaningful poem; full of insight into emotional work to be done. I found the picture shocked me somewhat into a less than staid place. Great work!

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  3. I love this, especially the last three lines.

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  4. Love the last three lines 'go as deep as coral
    or as high as sky
    but do not omit the necessary middle' so true...

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  5. "you may dot the face
    you can't gag the mind"
    your poems always deep.

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  6. i like "deep as coral and high as sky," our minds are so versatile!

    6 years of blogging is quite the accomplishment!!! congratulations!

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  7. That's some brilliant imagery, and great words of wisdom too, Gautami.. nice!

    Oh.. and heartiest congratulations of your 6th blog-birthday! May you have many more...

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  8. You can't gag the mind -- yes, yes!

    Congratulations on all those years of blogging!

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  9. congrats on 6 years of blogging...yay
    and deep as coral...high as the sky...beautiful - powerful!

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  10. Evocative write, the middle way so important in our journey. Much enjoyed! ~ Rose

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  11. Me thinks deep comment on tradition here.

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  12. Gautami...
    Week after week you never fail to amaze me with your awesome talent.
    Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  13. love it absolutely.
    you are doing superb job.
    keep it up.
    :)

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  14. This is really incredible! I loved it the message is powerful

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  15. powerful words... beautifully penned

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  16. The image you have chosen is perfect for those deep words...! The 3rd, 4th lines mesmerized my feel for the moment!! And the last two ended it well..Congrats on completing 6 yrs too..u have had some real cool ones over the years etched in our hearts..! God bless..

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  17. Gautami,

    It is a pleasure to read your poems. Congratulation completing 6 years and 1000 posts. Hope to continue reading you here for long long time to come.

    Take care

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  18. reading one's face is a beautiful thing.... congrats on those years of poetry....

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  19. beautiful sentiment and congratulations on the anniversary

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  20. I remembered a line from a song - 'free Your mind and the rest will follow'...your encouragement to go 'deep....and high....' was a great message in a great poem...

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