this has a great feel to it, in such a small space of words.
beautiful haiku... brilliantl;y written...
Hum! I like it!!<3
Such a physical feel to your words...wonderful!
I had pictures of letters dancing and then slipping quietly out the door...this was a fun one!
Oooh, nice -- a musical haiku. I can hear a melody for it! :)
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Cool. I love thinking about language and this is spot-on.
which speak to the heart more intensely.. beautiful thought, that Gautami!
sparse on a page yet filled with an energy of huge proportions...
I needed quite a while to get closer to the text. Very intellectual short-poem.Best wishesRalf
Oh where, oh where do they go?
wow...packed in so a limited words but the meaning seems to reverberate in a wide spectrum!beautiful Gautami!
Nice evocation of syncopation
Ooooh, I like the word "hums" at the end. That's what words do once they've been spoken.
Escape! It did fit the circus theme. Thanks for joining the Big Tent!
You inspired me. So few words said so much...which was also the meaning. Perfect and brilliant.
i love this one!!!