Past , present ,future merged together..that sums up and one knows one is in touch with an enlightened soul.. very well expressed..
Yes, we've got to grasp order out of it all.
Sometimes the past can loom over us. Living and being in the moment has its rewards, but can be so difficult to do. Nice play on words in the title too. :)
past always reigns sometimes and we could hardly get away with it...why it is so? maybe it will always be that way!lovely execution of thoughts Gautami!
The here and now is yesterday and tomorrow in a compact form. So is your verse. I like it.Best wishesRalf
I really like this- short, sweet, and to the point. I look forward to reading more!
nice use of repetition to tie the past present and future together
Anyone who can rein in the chaotic thoughts is doing well. Good for you triptoes!Nice to hear from you again.
i love the idea of past, present and futere melded as one; nice job!
Love what you did with this prompt.Pamela
this is a great poem g...it like where this goes
I enjoyed the way you used 'reign' and 'rein'...nice work.
Yeah the past sure does reign...U said it well. :)
A beautiful merging. Ruins are like old friends who remind us how fragile, how temporary, life is.
When it all comes together, would you really want to change a thing?
Short and to the point! Another winner.
I like how you honor the present! and clever use of rein and reign!
Gautami,Read 2 poems now. Both show depth of thoughts.Take care
nice writing. enjoy your thoughts and play on words