Sunday 28 March 2010

transient

it is two o'clock-
time when someone else’s love
becomes transiently yours

17 comments:

  1. Stopping by from Carry On Tuesday-- I love this. I am a sucker for a good haiku. :) I want to know the story here.

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  2. Nice one! I like the links:-)

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  3. Not tonight - I'll be watching the football match (6 hours time difference)... Come on City...!

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  4. I can only think soap operas...;)

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  5. and it was 2'o clock when I lost 1hr to the summer timezone..

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  6. Hi Gautami,
    I planned to meet you in my dreams
    You dreamed you'd meet me too
    No accident of fate or chance
    We planned our dreams
    We chose romance
    Every night at two...

    <3 perhaps?

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  7. Is it because you can hear them from the next room?

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  8. What's special about 2 o'clock? AM or PM? nice haiku

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  9. old Grizz is in awe...so much said,,so few words...nice post

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  10. To me it is the term of "someone else's love". This put's the lyrical I into the role of a love-eater. Tough haiku.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  11. specifically unspecific, leaving you wondering, and everyone else *smiling*

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  12. oh yes, 2a knows all of our secrets! Well done

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  13. oh man my mind wonders.... possibly a cup of soothing peppermint tea....

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  14. Hi - Carry On Tuesday has a new address. Hope to see you there. Keith

    http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/

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