Certainly gets the idea across--wow.
Beautiful words, I love the way you wrote this!<3 Andy
It does indeed. Great words.
Well written, and very strong!
I really like the heat of this, the obvious desire.
I have been missing you, something ghostly this way came....;)
WOW. Despite being an Indian and a Mathematics teacher, you are really really good!
Great choice of words.
A kind of Jack Sprat and his wife scenario, only much more subtly portrayed.
A touch of seriousness and a touch of wry humour! Love the mix!
Love the counterpoint - you come undone - he is done in - great stuff!
Wow...this is really an exciting take on the prompt Gautami...I could feel the excitement...:))
Oooh, great job -- you portray the passionate cross currents so well. :)
an exchange without cost...yes, no!!??