Monday 17 August 2009

this journey started the right way

if you ever change your mind, give me a ring
we’ll check out the weather to take out the boat
carrying food, clothes and other essential things
go out into the sea, whirring away we float
sleeping it out on the boat, soaking the sun in
to prevent from skin burns, I put up a shade
applying lotions, sunscreens on your fair skin
so soft, so smooth to touch, as velvety as suede

If you rather not we will go to the beach
watch the sea waves so beautifully blue
against my better judgement I slowly reach
out, pulling you into me to love all of you

just when you ask me to take you back to land
reaching for your finger, I push in the gold band!

14 comments:

  1. Yes indeed! This relationship started the right way. Really nice writing. Happy Monday~

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  2. Good ending. And that's quite a relationship.

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  3. Nice! I'm a romantic at heart! Enjoyed this.

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  4. Beautiful descriptions in here!

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  5. Fantastic jouney - long may it continue!

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  6. and he didn't even have to get down on one knee or did he? lovely poetry. good work

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  7. Oh romance 'en cachette' very sneaky and poetic and beautiful and passionate :)

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  8. *grin* Twisty! And delightful.

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  9. Wish I had a clear view into the last two lines: at the moment I think you gave her no chance to say no ... surprising one!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  10. Brilliant...The ending esp...Too good

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  11. Loved the ending...a lovely journey indeed.

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  12. Certainly a lot of planning there!But the finale seemed pretty spontaneous!

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