This makes the little shark on my arm so lame :-)Nicely done.
I hope those numbers weren't six six six!<3
Dead good!Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge? this week!!-Andy Sewina
Well done.This reminds me of the new fashion I am seeing people wear on thier bodies...it is a barcode tatoo - scan that one!
Very clever! Nicely done.
There's so much life within a tattoo! Loved how you used your words here.
You've created a nifty NaiSaiKu Challenge piece full of wit and wisdom.
really?it is no longer in fashion :)http://1goal1passion.blogspot.com/2009/08/three-words-only.html
clever use of words :-)
well down, I like how you structured the poem.
Great way to use the form and the prompt words - it's a fine, fine read!
That's some tattoo!
Tattoos leave a history...I loved your take on this prompt.
Great writing, and so fun to read! LMAO @ at Andy's 666 comment
Cleverly done! Whatever one's opinion of tattoos, there's no doubt we've lost a lot of the grace of prior eras.
Nice, nice and very true
Good one :) tatoo was a riot - is great!
I have to admit I'm not at all sure what the numbers refer to. When I think of tattooed numbers, the image of Nazi concentration camps comes to mind, but I don't believe that's what you were talking about...
Great write. It makes me think possibly the tattoo has the year stamped in there somewhere, someone's memento of whatever bygone era you speak of. Very descriptive, yet leaves much to the imagination. A graceful stride across the parking lot