Well that certainly wasn't the ending I was expecting :-)
Hahaa. Enjoyed this one
This is almost lighthearted!
Very good- a nice twist.
i like the way you mix up styles, you're always good with surprises.
Having lived on a farm I enjoyed reading this one very much. Great twist at the end. Hope all is well.
Too funny! I like the rhyming at the end!
Great work with a nice surprise It is not always as we think it is
Love the ending!
made me smile.
an ending with fistfights..:) I like that.
Those pesky kids. Good one!
This is an enjoyable read. I like that you completely changed the form and voice in the last stanza by using rhyme.
unexpected ending but I like the build-up
awesome :D LOVE IT! :DMy Carry On Tuesday 'Fear'