Wednesday 13 May 2009

unfocussed

I get so nervous when you bicker at me and then the trajectory of my focus goes awry.

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23 comments:

  1. Love the Indian Sentence... the last word is such a very clever turn!!

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  2. Sometimes, short is the sweetest. I agree, the last word makes this work.

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  3. reminded me of a 12 step slogan..."Do you want to be right, or do you want to be happy?" Good job.

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  4. I can hardly think with all the yacking in here! ;>)

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  5. Short and to the point. I like it!

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  6. Would it be amiss then if I gazed instead of speaking?

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  7. An awry focus is one of the worst things! :) Neat sentence full of pith.

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  8. I can feel it. You have to look out - it might be that you can't stop it anymore. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  9. "Trajectory of my focus" I like that!

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  10. Another single sentence- this is terrific! I really like your writing here. Great stuff.
    Bella

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  11. Great! I use to love doing one sentences 3WWs.

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  12. Annoyingly true and then we find a great retort a day later.

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  13. I like... Alot!!
    Very precise

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  14. Great!! Precise one line :)

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