Friday 7 July 2006

Self-less Love

what is mine is yours
what is yours is mine
i take your diamonds
you pay off my debts!

9 comments:

  1. Hi Gautami,
    Reached here from ryze, where I am no longer active. Liked your creations very much.
    This ,self-less love, is a little less self-explanatory... does this signify any irony, or am I simply not getting its idea?

    - Vikas

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  2. This seems to play very interestingly off of the ideal "merging" in marriage between the two parties ("what is mine is yours / what is yours is mine"), while then portraying what is often (sadly) the reality of a marriage of convenience. Nice contrast within the single stanza.

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  3. ha! I liked this one!
    Thanks.

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  4. LOL That's what I'm talking about. :)

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  5. You do sound "firmly rooted" here...

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  6. what is mine is debt
    what is yours are diamonds
    you don't seem to mind it
    my credit card i can't find it.

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  7. Vikas, this short poem is exactly what it says...new age philosophy!

    You got that, mike.

    LOL! thanks blue athena,samuru999, don and renee!

    Do I darius? Thanks...:)

    percival:fitting reply!

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