Sunday, 10 July 2011

scrolled

rough notes
fragment of snatched words
unspoken yet loud
I find on that bench
in a hollow pipe
you left that scroll aeons ago
and the sign read thus

silence
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19 comments:

  1. Jinksy10 July 2011 at 00:39

    Some people can have the effect of making us roll our words out of sight, in silence...

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  2. Deborah10 July 2011 at 02:52

    Brillliant!

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  3. ayala10 July 2011 at 03:53

    I love this !

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  4. Brian Miller10 July 2011 at 04:00

    silence is often a blessing itself...

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  5. The Woodswoman10 July 2011 at 05:00

    Goodness gracious ... well done!!!

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  6. Ramesh Sood10 July 2011 at 06:01

    And to know the silence.. beautiful... Gautami..

    I invite you to my 300th post and would love to seek your feedback..?

    It will inspire..

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  7. MorningAJ10 July 2011 at 06:17

    That's lovely.

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  8. Sue10 July 2011 at 06:44

    Well done!

    =)

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  9. BECKY10 July 2011 at 07:06

    I agree with all of the above! So very lovely!

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  10. Dazee Dreamer10 July 2011 at 08:06

    wow, so little words, but such a big impact. loved it.

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  11. Judie10 July 2011 at 09:25

    A very visual piece!

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  12. Mama Zen10 July 2011 at 09:33

    I like this!

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  13. Morning10 July 2011 at 10:44

    cool write,

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  14. Christine10 July 2011 at 12:46

    that second line is brilliant, good one.

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  15. Jo10 July 2011 at 13:41

    oh you convey so much with so few words ... this was beautiful

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  16. twitches10 July 2011 at 14:26

    "unspoken yet loud" - great line!

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  17. Karen S.10 July 2011 at 17:05

    Yes! silence is golden...and this is awesome, thank you!

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  18. cj Schlottman11 July 2011 at 10:32

    "...snatched words
    unspoken yet loud..."

    Powerful words, I say. This is a lovely poem, expressing so much in so few words.

    Namaste..........cj

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  19. Jenny17 July 2011 at 09:09

    Such quiet power you've shared here in so few words.

    Brilliant.

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