Hi Gautami, Reached here from ryze, where I am no longer active. Liked your creations very much. This ,self-less love, is a little less self-explanatory... does this signify any irony, or am I simply not getting its idea?
This seems to play very interestingly off of the ideal "merging" in marriage between the two parties ("what is mine is yours / what is yours is mine"), while then portraying what is often (sadly) the reality of a marriage of convenience. Nice contrast within the single stanza.
Hi Gautami,
ReplyDeleteReached here from ryze, where I am no longer active. Liked your creations very much.
This ,self-less love, is a little less self-explanatory... does this signify any irony, or am I simply not getting its idea?
- Vikas
This seems to play very interestingly off of the ideal "merging" in marriage between the two parties ("what is mine is yours / what is yours is mine"), while then portraying what is often (sadly) the reality of a marriage of convenience. Nice contrast within the single stanza.
ReplyDeleteHahahahahaha! :))
ReplyDeleteha! I liked this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks.
Good one Gautami.
ReplyDeleteLOL That's what I'm talking about. :)
ReplyDeleteYou do sound "firmly rooted" here...
ReplyDeletewhat is mine is debt
ReplyDeletewhat is yours are diamonds
you don't seem to mind it
my credit card i can't find it.
Vikas, this short poem is exactly what it says...new age philosophy!
ReplyDeleteYou got that, mike.
LOL! thanks blue athena,samuru999, don and renee!
Do I darius? Thanks...:)
percival:fitting reply!